我给大家看看FREDMIRANDA上是如何开展图片评论的,大家不妨借鉴一下,
看原图参见:
http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/506138发图的人是 RADISH, 从他的贴图量来看绝对新人, 看看FM上其他人是如何评论他的图片的
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Interesting shots. Were you going after the reflection, the people?
There are a couple things I think you would want to do on these. First off, they are overexposed, the water and the sky is blown out. Hopefully you shot in raw, so I would first go back and convert these at 1 stop and at 2 stops underexposed and see what you have. The other thing, is these look like they were shot close to mid-day. Especially at Badwater, unless you are shooting the first hour or two or the last hour or two of the day, your shots are going to look pretty harsh. But first I would reprocess these and then maybe blend the water and sky in to match the salt bed.
Hope that helps!
Jim
翻译:
有趣的照片, 你在试图拍摄水中的倒影, 人?
我想我有下面几点想说, 首先, 照片过曝了, 水和天空都洗白了, 希望你是用RAW格式拍摄的, 要是我的话我会在转化过程中减1-2快门的曝光量, 然后看看是什么样子. 此外, 这张图片像是中午拍摄的, 特别是在BADWATER(地名), 假如你不在天亮或日落前2个小时内拍摄,光总是有点猛. 但我首先会重新后期制做这张照片, 或许能通过图层混合把水以及天空找回来, 和盐床能配上.
希望我的评论能帮上忙.
JIM
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Dont crop the tops of the mountains off! Jim makes a good point about exposure and these could be improved by bringing some of the sky back though the overexposed look does hold a certain charm
Alex
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别将山山面的天空裁掉! JIM的对你提出的曝光建议很好,这样一来会把天空找回来, 尽管过曝的照片有时候也有一定吸引力.
ALEX
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FLORIS:
I second all the above comments, and additionally, if you blend in a darker version of the mountians you could boost the contrast in that portion to reduce the haze effect as well.
Floris
翻译:
我赞同上面的评论, 此外, 如果你把一张减曝的照片和原始照片混合一下, 可以提高照片中山的对比度, 且可以消除山体的光晕.
FLORIS
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Well, first of all you do not have enough space above the mountain peaks..
Eric
翻译:
嗯, 首先你照片中山上面的空间不够大...........
ERIC
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RASIDH 的回复:
Thank you all for your comments.
I reduced the exposure as you suggested.
It was around 2:00pm when I shot the pictures, and it was cloudy that day. Sigh, I hope I could have stayed till sunset to shoot >_<
翻译:
谢谢大家的评论. 按照大家建议,我把曝光减了.
我是在大约下午2点拍摄的这张照片, 那天阴天. 哎, 我想我当时能等日落再拍摄就好了............
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上面是到目前为止的一些评论.我翻译的不好大家凑合着看, 我想这样的讨论/评论对无论是发图的人还是旁观的人都能受益! 我们能否这样??? 能否少说点"大气, 好光影, 欣赏"的空话, 多来点这样建设性的评论, 该多好!!
